Age/Gender: 16, Male
Location: Spring of Silver
Job: Schooler
I like music. I like to make music. So check me out.
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 990 / 1,110
Exp. Rank #: 37,317
Voting Pow.: 5.22 votes
BBS Posts: 218 (0.17 per day)
Flash Reviews: 8
Music Reviews: 247
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
All Audio Reviews
247 Reviews | 167 w/ Responses
oh man that lead synth right at the beginning caught my attention so fast.
Melody is perfect, very creative.
Drums are a bit confusing, but it fits pretty well for the song. Bass drum i think could be changed, deeper maybe more reverb to fit that snare?
Melody that starts at :29 I think could be changed up a bit, it seems repetitive and doesn't feel like its going anywhere, but thats just my thoughts.
otherwise this song is great man. keep it up =]
Author's Response:
ya this was a pretty random experiment lol
u definitely got some good ideas but unfortunately i cant work on the song anymore cuz im missing a bunch of plugins haha
but thx for the review man
ur the master at these types of tracks with synths n stuff lol
K-Dm
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
This a really unique song, great ideas. It almost sounds like a like asian melody or something haha idk. I like the bassline, but it could be a bit louder =] just to make it a little more hip hopish. The beat could be a little more either creative or just more like busy if u know what i mean.. like more percussion or just more hats hitting and stuff... Overall though this is a pretty cool song! =]
Author's Response:
Thanks man. Ya, I hear you about adding more to this, I just couldn't figure out what to do lol. As for the bass, ya, it probably could be turned up, I'm still figuring out how to properly EQ with these headphones but meh.
Thanks for the review!
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
No problem for the beat, nice rhymes bro. Idk ur flow was a little off... the flow in "creep herbin ninja" or w/e was better.
GJ man tho this is awesome
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
this song makes me so depressed i think ima kill myself...
5/5 10/10
hi
Author's Response:
LOL HI
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
brings back those clint eastwood memories hhahhaha
morricones a genius and so r u so this beat is sick :D
whered u get the sample? if u just sampled it out the original than wow..how do u do it haha
Author's Response:
This is a Jay-Z beat lol
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Hey dude u review alotta my stuff so i thot id check ur stuff out :D
Lyrics are aiite man they really deep man, kinda like eminem / immortal technique.
THis is close to being great. You need to practice singing/rapping, u lacked emotion in the begining but then u started getting into it toward the end. You also need a better mic. Keep working man gj
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for the review. Ya, I've gained access to a better microphone for a bit and am currently recording on it. That's also working towards practicing lol. Thanks for the comments on the lyrics
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
joeykeys is rite about the drop but this is beautiful :D
I had to listen to the intro twice before the rest of the song b/c it was too good haha...
synths were awesome, they soundbank ones or u got new 1s??? melodys were epic as always... choir was cool hahaha.
beat was amazing.
overall awesome dude sounds like alotta hard work :D
Author's Response:
Thank you mug.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
moforter like shit hahahahaha
true t-pain overdo that stuff like crazy. he sound gay 2 hahahah
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
idc if u pmed me to check out ur song... 4 masters of ng in one song... it deserves #1
instrumentals were sick. sounds straight pro. u gonna b one of da greats man this is sick.
5/5, 10/10, DL :D
vocals are were clean (like good quality haha)
keep it up
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
I cant believe everyone isnt checking out your stuff its amazing...
You put great moods into your songs, and its not even close to repetetive.
The instruments are great 2 what program u use?
Gj on this song man. keep it up
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.